Talk:Shattered Plains

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This article, to me, is far too out of universe. IMO the coppermind should not mention the book or series the item of interest is about, especially in the first sentence. It's ok for it to be enumerated in an infobox like the character appearances, or in the notes section, but the content of the article should be as in-universe as possible. Joe ST 20:03, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

• I'm not worked up about being in-universe, because there are plenty of reasons why one can refer to out of universe knowledge (like, the move of the Shattered Plains from Yolen to Roshar). That said, the first sentence totally sucks. -- Chaos2651 18:28, 5 September 2011 (UTC)