User talk:Debarra/hoid

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Note on Completion[edit]

As it seems likely others may come now to comment on this page to discuss aspects I am leaving a note here to state what I would considered closer to a finished version rather than a rough draft. Note these sections are not finished, merely the closest to what I imagine a final version would look like and follow a proper format rather than being a list.

  • The new lead.
  • The first section 'Name and Nature' (Put first as rationale was a new readers first questions would probably be about these two questions.)
  • Section on magic under Attributes and Abilities. (Note not the individual magic systems, just the section immediately under magic. Needed to be further cut and refined.)
  • History from Origins to Catcandre. (The section on Elantris and Catacendre I would consider the strongest.)
  • Culture section I felt only needed another few drafts to fix the overall flow and presentation of information.
  • The Well of Ascension Retcon Section under Development.

--Debarra (talk) 20:13, 2 October 2023 (UTC)