1. Do we know any details about the time between the Village and the Roughs? This should go at the start of the "the Roughs" section, even if it's just a sentence with few details.
2. Sentence or two about Granite Joe and meeting Lessie--what happened there.
3. I think there are more anecdotes from bounties worth including in the "The Roughs" section?
4. Mention discovery of the "Allomantic grenade" on the train in BoM