Talk:Half-shard
Revision as of 18:54, 5 September 2013 by WeiryWriter (talk | contribs)
Hi Weiry, I'd cut the first sentence after "Veden Artifabrians." We don't know how long they worked on the development of those half-shards nor do we really know that they are that new as Navani thinks. Or you say something like "It was late during the War of Reckoning when knowledge about the first Half-shards was spread." Aside from this remark: IMHO the article is complete. **Meg (talk) 18:36, 5 September 2013 (UTC)**
- I think the sentence works as is. It doesn't refer to how long the development was, just to point in time when that development was completed, which was late during the War of Reckoning. Also Navani is very informed about these things, and I would be flabbergasted if she was wrong about this.--WeiryWriter (talk) 18:54, 5 September 2013 (UTC)