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<noinclude>|Kwaan's inscription in the Conventical of Saran}}
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==Comparison between Kwaan's original text and the version modified by Ruin==
Ruin's version (chapter 30, Well of Ascension):
1. "I am afraid, however, that all I have known - that my story - will be forgotten. I am afraid for the world that is to come. Afraid that '''Alendi''' will fail. Afraid of a doom '''brought by''' the Deepness."
2. "Alendi's height struck me the first time I saw him. Here was a man '''who was small of stature, but who seemed to tower over others,''' a man who demanded respect."
3. "When I finally had the realization - finally connected all of the signs of the Anticipation to '''him''' - I was so excited."
Correct version from the epitaphs:
1. chapter 7: "I am afraid, however, that all I have known - that my story - will be forgotten. I am afraid for the world that is to come. Afraid that '''my plans''' will fail. Afraid of a doom '''worse than''' the Deepness."
2. chapter 10: "Alendi's height struck me the first time I saw him. Here was a man who '''towered over others''', a man who - '''despite his youth and clothing -''' demanded respect."
3. chapter 13: "When I finally had the realization - finally connected all of the signs of the Anticipation to '''Alendi''' - I was so excited."
Ruin's version (chapter 41):
1. "Rashek is to try and lead Alendi in the wrong direction, to discourage him or otherwise foil his quest. Alendi won't know that he has been deceived '''[words missing]'''''.
2. "If Rashek fails to lead Alendi astray, then I have instructed the lad to kill '''my former friend'''''.
3. "Alendi must not reach the Well of Ascension. '''He must not take the power for himself'''''.
Correct version from the epitaphs:
1. chapter 55: ''Rashek is to try and lead Alendi in the wrong direction, to discourage him or otherwise foil his quest. Alendi won't know that he has been deceived, '''that we've all been deceived, and he won't listen to me.'''
2. chapter 56: ''If Rashek fails to lead Alendi astray, then I have instructed the lad to kill '''Alendi'''.''
3. chapter 59: ''Alendi must not reach the Well of Ascension, '''for he must not release the thing that is imprisoned there'''.''
== Notes ==
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