Difference between revisions of "User talk:Nightstar The Bright"

I was finally getting around to looking at your forum post about Hallandren's history (it soundsounds like a great solution to summarize the bit about Hanald and make sure it links over there), but while I was looking around at the relevant pages I had a couple of other comments that weren't really relevant to that post, so I'll put them here. Overall this doesn't look like it's a huge deal for the pages as they are now, but one of the things I'm noticing as I look at [[T'Telir]] is that it can be a bit difficult to distinguish what is more appropriate for the T'Telir page and what is more appropriate for [[Hallandren]]'s page. For instance, it's a great detail that you picked up on about Fob having his lands seized by the state in war time in Hallandren, but that feels more appropriate for a politics or economics section on Hallandren, and doesn't really warrant a mention in the geography section on T'Telir, which should be more about the city specifically. Some overlap of information is fine and even at times necessary, but if we can make some distinctions, it will help the pages be more unique and give readers less of a feeling like they've read it before. I've edited the geography sections on both pages to reflect what I think the distinctions there could be (and moved the bit about the farms in war time), but please don't take that like I'm taking over your overhauling project - you're doing a good job, and if you disagree with the changes I've made, they're easy enough to undo.