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By the time of his death, Elhokar is a budding [[Surgebinder]] of the [[Order of Lightweavers]], although he passes away before he can finish stating the First Ideal.{{book ref|sa3|84}} In the months or years leading up to his death, he's been seeing [[Cryptic]]s, in their [[Shadesmar]] form, in mirrors.{{book ref|sa1|58}} He seems to have also spotted a [[Physical Realm|Physical]] form of a Cryptic at some point -- possibly [[Design]], the spren that began a proto-bond with him.{{book ref|sa3|74}}{{book ref|sa4|epilogue}} If Elhokar had lived long enough to speak his first [[Order of Lightweavers#Ideals of the Lightweavers|Truth]], it would be to admit that he was a bad king.{{wob ref|11730}} Pretending he was a good king for years was also the lie that drew the Cryptics to him.{{wob ref|12364}}
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By the time of his death, Elhokar is a budding [[Surgebinder]] of the [[Order of Lightweavers]], although he passes away before he can finish stating the First Ideal.{{book ref|sa3|84}} In the months or years leading up to his death, he's been seeing [[Cryptic]]s, in their [[Shadesmar]] form, in mirrors.{{book ref|sa1|58}} He seems to have also spotted a [[Physical Realm|Physical]] form of a Cryptic at some point -- possibly [[Design]], the spren that began a proto-bond with him.{{book ref|sa3|74}}{{book ref|sa4|epilogue}}
   
 
He's a Shardbearer, with both a [[Shardblade]] and [[Shardplate]]. His Blade is called [[Sunraiser]]; it's long and thin, with a large crossguard and the ten basic [[glyph]]s etched up the sides of the blade.{{book ref|sa1|13}}{{book ref|sa1|12}} He also owns several other sets of Plate and Blade, including [[Gavilar]]'s [[Firestorm]] and his Shardplate. Those are often loaned out for training and duels to [[lighteyes]] that don't have their own.{{book ref|sa2|16}}{{file ref|Shardplate.jpeg|pre=[[Shallan's sketchbook]] - |Shard sketches}}
 
He's a Shardbearer, with both a [[Shardblade]] and [[Shardplate]]. His Blade is called [[Sunraiser]]; it's long and thin, with a large crossguard and the ten basic [[glyph]]s etched up the sides of the blade.{{book ref|sa1|13}}{{book ref|sa1|12}} He also owns several other sets of Plate and Blade, including [[Gavilar]]'s [[Firestorm]] and his Shardplate. Those are often loaned out for training and duels to [[lighteyes]] that don't have their own.{{book ref|sa2|16}}{{file ref|Shardplate.jpeg|pre=[[Shallan's sketchbook]] - |Shard sketches}}
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The next morning, Shallan gave them all illusions and disguised Elhokar as a lighteyed woman, to which he didn't object. Together they looked like refugees trying to enter the city. Before the reached the city, Elhokar spoke to Kaladin about the stakes of the mission. He expected to fail, and commanded Kaladin to succeed where he failed and save the city. When they found the city gates to be blocked by soldiers, Elhokar took the lead and demanded entrance. The guards refused unless his soldiers would join the Wall Guard. Elhokar asked after their commander (a Highmarshal Azure he had never heard of), and who commands him (no one). Elhokar could not understand it, but refused and said he needed his guards. Everyone was distracted when the Fused assaulted the wall, and the group used the confusion to sneak into the city. Adolin then led them to his tailor.{{book ref|sa3|61}}
 
The next morning, Shallan gave them all illusions and disguised Elhokar as a lighteyed woman, to which he didn't object. Together they looked like refugees trying to enter the city. Before the reached the city, Elhokar spoke to Kaladin about the stakes of the mission. He expected to fail, and commanded Kaladin to succeed where he failed and save the city. When they found the city gates to be blocked by soldiers, Elhokar took the lead and demanded entrance. The guards refused unless his soldiers would join the Wall Guard. Elhokar asked after their commander (a Highmarshal Azure he had never heard of), and who commands him (no one). Elhokar could not understand it, but refused and said he needed his guards. Everyone was distracted when the Fused assaulted the wall, and the group used the confusion to sneak into the city. Adolin then led them to his tailor.{{book ref|sa3|61}}
   
Elhokar, Adolin and Kaladin interrogated [[Yokska]] the tailor, to find out about the current state of the city. She found it hard to tell the story without saying something bad about queen Aesudan, but Elhokar reassured her that their would be no reprisal. She then told about the riots, how the queen vanished from public eye and had the guards retreat. Elhokar found it all hard to take in and  resisted putting any blame on his wife, suggesting it was all the fault of the dark spren around the palace. When Yokska recalls the proclamation ordering the death of all the Parshmen, Elhokar found it reassuring that the message about the danger of the Parshmen had come through. A group of nobles went to the palace to protest, never to be seen again. Eventually the wallguard restored order and exiled the Parsh. In the end the city was now lawless. After dismissing the tailor, the group formed a plan. Elhokar concluded the voidbringers were cutting of the city for a siege. He wanted to be cautions while still take action. He suggested to have Shallan pretend to be a messenger from the plains with a letter from him for the queen to investigate the palace. When Kaladin complained about the rest of them needing to wait, Elhokar told him "Waiting and trusting those whom you have empowered is the soul of kingship, Windrunner."{{book ref|sa3|62}}
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Elhokar, Adolin and Kaladin interrogated [[Yokska]] the tailor, to find out about the current state of the city. She found it hard to tell the story without saying something bad about queen Aesudan, but Elhokar reassured her that their would be no reprisal. She then told about the riots, how the queen vanished from public eye and had the guards retreat. Elhokar found it all hard to take in and resisted putting any blame on his wife, suggesting it was all the fault of the dark spren around the palace. When Yokska recalls the proclamation ordering the death of all the Parshmen, Elhokar found it reassuring that the message about the danger of the Parshmen had come through. A group of nobles went to the palace to protest, never to be seen again. Eventually the wallguard restored order and exiled the Parsh. In the end the city was now lawless. After dismissing the tailor, the group formed a plan. Elhokar concluded the voidbringers were cutting of the city for a siege. He wanted to be cautions while still take action. He suggested to have Shallan pretend to be a messenger from the plains with a letter from him for the queen to investigate the palace. When Kaladin complained about the rest of them needing to wait, Elhokar told him "Waiting and trusting those whom you have empowered is the soul of kingship, Windrunner."{{book ref|sa3|62}}
   
 
A day after her excursion to the palace, Shallan found Elhokar sitting in the kitchen. He was drawing a map of the city and had made a plan. It was clear to him that the queen needed rescue, although Kaladin wasn't sure. Elhokar asked Shallan to investigate the [[Cult of Moments]], while Elhokar and Adolin would try to rally support among the local lighteyes. Lastly he tasked Kaladin with investigating the wall guard. Adolin then drew their attention to the accusations the ardent had made against Aesudan. Elhokar still defended her, referring that Jasnah never liked her.{{book ref|sa3|67}}
 
A day after her excursion to the palace, Shallan found Elhokar sitting in the kitchen. He was drawing a map of the city and had made a plan. It was clear to him that the queen needed rescue, although Kaladin wasn't sure. Elhokar asked Shallan to investigate the [[Cult of Moments]], while Elhokar and Adolin would try to rally support among the local lighteyes. Lastly he tasked Kaladin with investigating the wall guard. Adolin then drew their attention to the accusations the ardent had made against Aesudan. Elhokar still defended her, referring that Jasnah never liked her.{{book ref|sa3|67}}
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Together with Adolin and Azure, Elhokar led the assault on the steps of the palace. Each made for their own doorway and created an opening into the palace. They quickly took the entrance hall. The corridor to the Eastern Gallery was heavily guarded with a shield wall, but Elhokar commanded Azure to assault and clear the way. When the gallery was cleared and Kaladin and his men had secured the Sunwalk, Elhokar eyed the stairways. Elhokar and Kaladin led a group up the stairs to find the queen and heir.{{book ref|sa3|83}} Near the top, Kal and the king went first to clear the landing with their Blades. Elhokar tried to appeal to the loyalty of the palace guards, to no avail. The cross the corridors and eventually Elhokar heard Aesudan's voice. Elhokar talked to Aesudan and asked about his son, who was playing with his 'friends'. The king questioned the queen who was clearly not thinking straight. In the mean time Kaladin found Gavinor surrounded by red glowing spren and freed him. The queen started boasting about her grand plans, but when the king heard his son scream he rushed over and took his son. Kal questioned the motives of the being behind the queen, but Aesudan answered that [[Yelig-nar]] served her. Kal ordered the retreat.{{book ref|sa3|84}}
 
Together with Adolin and Azure, Elhokar led the assault on the steps of the palace. Each made for their own doorway and created an opening into the palace. They quickly took the entrance hall. The corridor to the Eastern Gallery was heavily guarded with a shield wall, but Elhokar commanded Azure to assault and clear the way. When the gallery was cleared and Kaladin and his men had secured the Sunwalk, Elhokar eyed the stairways. Elhokar and Kaladin led a group up the stairs to find the queen and heir.{{book ref|sa3|83}} Near the top, Kal and the king went first to clear the landing with their Blades. Elhokar tried to appeal to the loyalty of the palace guards, to no avail. The cross the corridors and eventually Elhokar heard Aesudan's voice. Elhokar talked to Aesudan and asked about his son, who was playing with his 'friends'. The king questioned the queen who was clearly not thinking straight. In the mean time Kaladin found Gavinor surrounded by red glowing spren and freed him. The queen started boasting about her grand plans, but when the king heard his son scream he rushed over and took his son. Kal questioned the motives of the being behind the queen, but Aesudan answered that [[Yelig-nar]] served her. Kal ordered the retreat.{{book ref|sa3|84}}
   
When they charged down the stairs, they heard sounds of fighting from below. Below it was parshman troops joining the fight, which caused Kaladin to freeze when he recognized them. Elhokar stood in the center of the room holding is son, amid some soldiers. It became a chaotic melee, which Kaladin tried to stop but couldn't. The guards around Elhokar fell and he got hit in his arm. The king fell to his knees holding  his son in one arm and Shallan's sketch of him in the other. He then started to stutter, while slowly starting to glow:
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When they charged down the stairs, they heard sounds of fighting from below. Below it was parshman troops joining the fight, which caused Kaladin to freeze when he recognized them. Elhokar stood in the center of the room holding is son, amid some soldiers. It became a chaotic melee, which Kaladin tried to stop but couldn't. The guards around Elhokar fell and he got hit in his arm. The king fell to his knees holding his son in one arm and Shallan's sketch of him in the other. He then started to stutter, while slowly starting to glow:
 
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|Life... life before death..., Strength... before weakness.... Journey.  Journey before...
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|Life... life before death..., Strength... before weakness.... Journey. Journey before...
 
|Elhokar stutteringly trying to speak the First Ideal{{book ref|sa3|84}}
 
|Elhokar stutteringly trying to speak the First Ideal{{book ref|sa3|84}}
 
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Nonetheless, Elhokar had always been intended to die, even if the circumstances around his death changed.{{wob ref|9273}} In the final version of the story, Brandon killed him off in order to showcase [[Moash]]'s descent into villainy.{{wob ref|12645}}
 
Nonetheless, Elhokar had always been intended to die, even if the circumstances around his death changed.{{wob ref|9273}} In the final version of the story, Brandon killed him off in order to showcase [[Moash]]'s descent into villainy.{{wob ref|12645}}
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== Trivia ==
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* If Elhokar had lived long enough to speak his first [[Order of Lightweavers#Ideals of the Lightweavers|Truth]], it would be to admit that he was a bad king.{{wob ref|11730}} Pretending he was a good king for years was also the lie that drew the Cryptics to him.{{wob ref|12364}}
   
 
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