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Before the battle, Adolin delivered the news to the Highprinces that the Parshendi numbered at least ten thousand to the Highprinces before the battle.{{book ref|sa2|80}} At the start of the battle, Dalinar commanded Adolin to take his force and stop the Parshendi's singing at all costs. He was accompanied by [[Skar]] and [[Drehy]] of Bridge Four as his guards. When Adolin crossed the bridge to engage the Parshendi, they summoned up lightning and killed Sureblood, knocking Adolin from his saddle. He grieved for a moment over the Ryshadium before charging back into the battle and commanding his troops. He discovered that the Parshendi's lightning acted like natural lightning and would often miss targets by going into the ground. He also discovered that their lightning did not affect Shardplate.{{book ref|sa2|81}}
 
The Parshendi tried to immobilize Adolin by lassoing him with ropes, but he managed to cut through them and fended the Parshendi off. The Parshendi were engaging Adolin in teams to keep him out of the battle where he'd be the most deadly. When [[Perel]], the man he had placed as field commander, called for the flank's retreat, Adolin guarded it in case the Parshendi pursued. Perel told him neither side iswas making headway and that he was worried about the singing Parshendi reserves up against a rock formation in the middle of the plateau. Adolin could no longer feel the Thrill, which he passed off as just being tired. Adolin remembered what Shallan said about the rock formations being hollow and devised a plan to go through the formation with a battalion.{{book ref|sa2|82}}
 
Adolin and a thousand men went through the crem encrusted building to the wall the Parshendi singers were hiding against. He cut two holes in the wall for his men to exit through,; the first one went unnoticed because of all the chanting and rain, but the second was noticed. He charged into the Parshendi and started cutting them down. He likened it to killing sleeping men and reflected on how attacking ordinary soldiers with Shards was doing dirty work. Despite winning the plateau, the Parshendi's expressions of horror haunted him as he cut them down, feeling nauseated. Though he was caught unawares by Eshonai and her's attack, he mentally thanked her for her arrival, glad to have an honest fight on his hands.{{book ref|sa2|83}}
 
Fighting Eshonai, Adolin sensed the Thrill in her and used this to his advantage in their duel, luring her to the edge of the plateau. Though Eshonai managed to break his vambrace, Adolin knockdknocked her off the edge of the plateau and down into the chasms. This gambit broke his helm and nearly toppled him over the edge as well, but he was caught and saved by Drehy and Skar.
 
While jogging across the bridge to find out what was going on with the rest of the army, Adolin grabbed the arm of a man in a thick cloak whowhom he assumed was delivering something and asked where his father iswas. When the hood fallsfell off, Adolin discovered the man iswas the Assassin in White.{{book ref|sa2|84}}
 
Szeth threw a badly beaten Adolin through one of the tents, and Adolin landed near his father, most of his Plate broken or cracked. DalinarAs cradledSzeth Adolinapproached, asDalinar Szethcradled approachedAdolin and told him to be a better man than he had been and to not play the games of the other lighteyes,. beforeAdolin gettingtried upto andstop approachingDalinar Szeth.from Adolingetting triedup toand stopapproaching himSzeth, but with so much of his Plate broken, he struggled to get upstand. He watched his father and Szeth fight and eventually managed to stand. Drehy and Skar helped him remove his armor. Once it's was off, he ran to save his father, who was kneltkneeling in defeat before Szeth, but. [[Roion]] got there before him and was Lashed upwards to the sky by Szeth. Wearing no Shardplate, Adolin engaged Szeth. Dalinar and Adolin both rushed Szeth, hoping to score a lucky blow, but Szeth flew out of the way. Szeth managed to land a hand on Dalinar in the fight and Lashed him upwards into the storm. Crying, Adolin began to rush Szeth, but the assassin pointed his [[Honorblade]] at Adolin and told him that it was finished and that he was done. Adolin moved to hit him, but Szeth parried the blow, breaking Adolin's wrist. He hit him in the chest, knocking the air from Adolin's lungs, and sayssaid he could kill one more. Before Szeth could, however, Kaladin landed with Dalinar in his grasp, safe.{{book ref|sa2|85}}
 
Kaladin chased after Szeth into the storm and Adolin, upon confirming Kaladin was one of the Knights Radiant, laughed and exclaimsexclaimed that he knew there was something wrong with the man. Dalinar send Adolin to help organize the army's move to Shallan's plateau. When he got to the plateau, he met up with Shallan and discovered she iswas a Radiant as well. They trytried using Adolin's Shardblade to open the Oathgate, but it didn't work and; they instead used [[Pattern]] in his Shardblade form. They both used their weight to work the mechanism, pushing the blade around the circle until it stood above the picture of Urithiru. When Shallan removed Pattern from the slot, the Oathgate activated. Once transported, they discovered the entire plateau was the portal.{{book ref|sa2|86}}
 
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