Editing Talk:Dilaf
Jump to navigation
Jump to search
Warning: You are not logged in. Your IP address will be publicly visible if you make any edits. If you log in or create an account, your edits will be attributed to your username, along with other benefits.
The edit can be undone. Please check the comparison below to verify that this is what you want to do, and then save the changes below to finish undoing the edit.
| Latest revision | Your text | ||
| Line 1: | Line 1: | ||
The history section dealing with the events of the book feels a bit over-detailed and has a lot of information not relevant to Dilaf. Among other things it should prolly just end at his death. I guess maybe "and then his coup was stopped" is still relevant. |
The history section dealing with the events of the book feels a bit over-detailed and has a lot of information not relevant to Dilaf. Among other things it should prolly just end at his death. I guess maybe "and then his coup was stopped" is still relevant. |
||
| β | |||
| β | |||
| β | :Yeah I think it reads better now. I think that having a brief conclusion of the affects of his death is good, though the shortened version you made is much better.[[User:Taln Fan|Taln Fan]] ([[User talk:Taln Fan|talk]]) 20:13, 19 February 2022 (UTC) |
||