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'''Kaladin'''
 
'''Kaladin'''
   
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The stormwall hits Kaladin, flings him around, presses him against the side of the barrack. When he screams, the coldness of the storm courses into his mouth. He clutches the sphere as if his life depends on it. Syl stays by his side and tells him to grab the roof. He does and comes to lay on the roof. For more grip he snatches the ring where his ropes are tied to and fights against being cast down by the highstorm, always clutching the sphere. In some brief moments he sees Syl standing before him as if trying to hold back the storm. His grip grows numb and he's flung about again. He sees a brief vision of an enormous face. Kaladin feels a deep chill running through his body. He looks at the sphere now glowing brightly. He falls unconscious.
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The stormwall hits Kaladin, flings him around, presses him against the side of the barrack. When he screams, the coldness of the storm courses into his mouth. He clutches the sphere as if his life depends on it. Syl stays by his side and tells him to grab the roof. He does and comes to lay on the roof. For more grip he snatches the ring where his ropes are tied to and fights against being cast down by the highstorm, always clutching the sphere. In some brief moments he sees Syl standing before him as if trying to hold back the storm. His grip grows numb and he's flung about again. He see a brief vision of an enormous face. Kaladin feels a deep chill running through his body. He looks at the sphere now glowing brightly. He falls unconscious.
   
 
'''Teft'''
 
'''Teft'''

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