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Dusk remembers a visit from the [[Ones Above]] earlier in the year, when he purchased accurate sea maps from them.
 
Dusk remembers a visit from the [[Ones Above]] earlier in the year, when he purchased accurate sea maps from them.
   
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He soon reaches an archipelago called the [[Pantheon]] and its first island [[Sori]], where he trained as an apprentice, but he continues onward to the Pantheon's largest island, [[Patji (island)|Patji]]. He lands on the shore and sees his own corpse floating in the water, a vision given to him by his second Aviar, Sak. The visions act as a warning of lethal danger.
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He soon reaches an archipelago called the [[Pantheon]] and its first island [[Sori]], where he trained as an apprentice, but he continues onward to the Pantheon's largest island, [[Patji]]. He lands on the shore and sees his own corpse floating in the water, a vision given to him by his second Aviar, Sak. The visions act as a warning of lethal danger.
   
 
As Dusk drags the boat up the shore and hides it behind some deadly vines, he finds some debris. After packing his equipment, he goes to investigate the source of the debris and finds a camp of the [[Northern Interests Trading Company]], apparently destroyed by a deepwalker.
 
As Dusk drags the boat up the shore and hides it behind some deadly vines, he finds some debris. After packing his equipment, he goes to investigate the source of the debris and finds a camp of the [[Northern Interests Trading Company]], apparently destroyed by a deepwalker.

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