Editing Summary:Elantris

Jump to navigation Jump to search

Warning: You are not logged in. Your IP address will be publicly visible if you make any edits. If you log in or create an account, your edits will be attributed to your username, along with other benefits.

The edit can be undone. Please check the comparison below to verify that this is what you want to do, and then save the changes below to finish undoing the edit.

Latest revision Your text
Line 15: Line 15:
 
*[[bws: annotation-elantris-prologue/|Prologue Annotation]]
 
*[[bws: annotation-elantris-prologue/|Prologue Annotation]]
   
== Part 1: The Shadow of Elantris ==
+
== Part One: The Shadow of Elantris ==
 
<!-- Part 1: Chapters 1 to 27 - The Shadow of Elantris -->
 
<!-- Part 1: Chapters 1 to 27 - The Shadow of Elantris -->
 
=== Chapter 1 ===
 
=== Chapter 1 ===
Line 70: Line 70:
 
[[Hrathen]], Fjordell gyorn, arrives by ship in Arelon to convert the people to [[Shu-Dereth]]. He has a three month deadline to finish the conversion, or else his god [[Jaddeth]] will destroy the Arelene people. He surveys Elantris and the surrounding areas with a military eye, judging it to be too poorly organized to be defensible. Hrathen's presence and appearance, with the imposing plate armor of a Derethi high priest, causes a stir as he walks to the Derethi chapel. En route, he is met by [[Fjon]], Kae's Derethi head [[arteth]]. Hrathen is displeased with Fjon, and with the lack of order he encounters at the chapel, and orders all the Derethi priests to be gathered. Hrathen orders Fjon to return to Fjordell to be remediated in his religious faith, stating that Fjon has been corrupted by being in Arelon for too long.
 
[[Hrathen]], Fjordell gyorn, arrives by ship in Arelon to convert the people to [[Shu-Dereth]]. He has a three month deadline to finish the conversion, or else his god [[Jaddeth]] will destroy the Arelene people. He surveys Elantris and the surrounding areas with a military eye, judging it to be too poorly organized to be defensible. Hrathen's presence and appearance, with the imposing plate armor of a Derethi high priest, causes a stir as he walks to the Derethi chapel. En route, he is met by [[Fjon]], Kae's Derethi head [[arteth]]. Hrathen is displeased with Fjon, and with the lack of order he encounters at the chapel, and orders all the Derethi priests to be gathered. Hrathen orders Fjon to return to Fjordell to be remediated in his religious faith, stating that Fjon has been corrupted by being in Arelon for too long.
   
Hrathen replaces Fjon as head arteth. Hrathen organizes his new office, and ruminates about a holy scroll written by [[Wyrn (title)|Wyrn]] [[Wulfden the Fourth]], containing his orders. Fjon confronts Hrathen, asking for another chance to serve in Kae, but when reading the scroll, realizes that he could not have carried out the orders held within, and takes his leave to return to Fjordell.
+
Hrathen replaces Fjon as head arteth. Hrathen organizes his new office, and ruminates about a holy scroll written by [[Wyrn (title)]] [[Wulfden the Fourth]], containing his orders. Fjon confronts Hrathen, asking for another chance to serve in Kae, but when reading the scroll, realizes that he could not have carried out the orders held within, and takes his leave to return to Fjordell.
   
Hrathen meets with Fjon's former underlings and realizes how disordered and corrupted by Arelon the chapel's staff had become. He only encounters one arteth with the proper potential, [[Dilaf]], who explained how while he was Arelene, he had learned to follow the Derethi faith. Dilaf states he went to [[Naen]] and gained a Derethi following, then returned to Kae when the chapel was built. Fjon raised Dilaf to arteth, though he didn't have the authority to do so. Hrathen is impressed with Dilaf's teaching ability, though he also feels caution at his ardor, and appoints him arteth and [[odiv]], to both reward him and control him.
+
Hrathen meets with Fjon's former underlings and realizes how disordered and corrupted by Arelon the chapel's staff had become. He only encounters one arteth with the proper potential, [[Dilaf]], who explained how while he was Arelene, he had learned to follow the Derethi faith. Dilaf states he went to [[Rain]] and gained a Derethi following, then returned to Kae when the chapel was built. Fjon raised Dilaf to arteth, though he didn't have the authority to do so. Hrathen is impressed with Dilaf's teaching ability, though he also feels caution at his ardor, and appoints him arteth and [[odiv]], to both reward him and control him.
   
 
After Hrathen dismisses Dilaf by sending him to make sure that Fjon is boarding a ship for Fjordell, Hrathen rereads the scroll with his orders. The scroll states that all of the Arelene and Teo people who fail to convert to Shu-Derethi within three months will be slain, and that Jaddeth will end his slumber within his tomb of rock, and ascend to rule. Hrathen wishes for the more peaceful resolution of conversion over annihilation.
 
After Hrathen dismisses Dilaf by sending him to make sure that Fjon is boarding a ship for Fjordell, Hrathen rereads the scroll with his orders. The scroll states that all of the Arelene and Teo people who fail to convert to Shu-Derethi within three months will be slain, and that Jaddeth will end his slumber within his tomb of rock, and ascend to rule. Hrathen wishes for the more peaceful resolution of conversion over annihilation.
Line 81: Line 81:
   
 
=== Chapter 4 ===
 
=== Chapter 4 ===
;Characters
 
 
{{columns|
 
{{columns|
 
* [[Raoden]] (point of view)
 
* [[Raoden]] (point of view)
 
* [[Galladon]]
 
* [[Galladon]]
* [[Riino]]
 
 
* [[Shaor]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Shaor]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Aanden]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Aanden]] (mentioned only)
Line 487: Line 485:
 
* [[Karata]]
 
* [[Karata]]
 
* [[Taan]]
 
* [[Taan]]
* [[Riino]]
 
 
* [[Raoden's mother]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Raoden's mother]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Shaor]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Shaor]] (mentioned only)
Line 657: Line 654:
 
* [[Karata]]
 
* [[Karata]]
 
* [[Saolin]]
 
* [[Saolin]]
* [[Riino]]
 
 
* [[Eondel]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Eondel]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Kiin]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Kiin]] (mentioned only)
Line 1,205: Line 1,201:
   
 
=== Chapter 47 ===
 
=== Chapter 47 ===
;Characters
 
   
{{columns|
 
* [[Sarene]] (point of view)
 
* [[Hrathen]]
 
* [[Eondel]]
 
* [[Kiin]]
 
* [[Lukel]]
 
* [[Roial]]
 
* [[Shuden]]
 
* [[Ashe]]
 
* [[Eventeo]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Ahan]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Torena]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Telrii]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Raoden]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Wyrn]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
 
Sarene returns to Kae and encounters Hrathen, who claims credit for healing her and gloats that she gave Teod and Eventeo to the Derethi, but she doubts that.
 
Sarene returns to Kae and encounters Hrathen, who claims credit for healing her and gloats that she gave Teod and Eventeo to the Derethi, but she doubts that.
   
Line 1,232: Line 1,209:
   
 
=== Chapter 48 ===
 
=== Chapter 48 ===
;Characters
 
   
{{columns|
 
* [[Hrathen]] (point of view)
 
* [[Telrii]]
 
* [[Iadon]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Wyrn]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
 
Hrathen is frustrated to have to wait for an audience with King Telrii but is eventually summoned to the newly redecorated throne room. Telrii discards any promises previously made to convert to Shu-Dereth, and reveals that he will convert as long as he is raised to the rank of gyorn, so that he doesn't have to suffer because of low rank. Telrii states that he has already sent a messenger with these demands to Wyrn, and dismisses Hrathen.
 
Hrathen is frustrated to have to wait for an audience with King Telrii but is eventually summoned to the newly redecorated throne room. Telrii discards any promises previously made to convert to Shu-Dereth, and reveals that he will convert as long as he is raised to the rank of gyorn, so that he doesn't have to suffer because of low rank. Telrii states that he has already sent a messenger with these demands to Wyrn, and dismisses Hrathen.
   
Line 1,247: Line 1,215:
   
 
=== Chapter 49 ===
 
=== Chapter 49 ===
;Characters
 
   
{{columns|
 
* [[Raoden]] (point of view)
 
* [[Galladon]]
 
* [[Sarene]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Mareshe]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Ashe]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Telrii]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
 
Raoden and Galladon discuss AonDor, and Galladon comments that perhaps the land has changed, causing Raoden to intuit that the chasm caused the Reod, rather than the other way around as speculated. Raoden draws a modified Ehe Aon, and it works, causing a fireball to incinerate part of the library. They realize that AonDor is still somewhat inhibited, however, since their aons don't produce as powerful effects as the books describe or affect people at all, and they still have not completed their transformations to pre-Reod Elantrians. They speculate that the first working Aon Ehe drained a long-untapped energy reserve.
 
Raoden and Galladon discuss AonDor, and Galladon comments that perhaps the land has changed, causing Raoden to intuit that the chasm caused the Reod, rather than the other way around as speculated. Raoden draws a modified Ehe Aon, and it works, causing a fireball to incinerate part of the library. They realize that AonDor is still somewhat inhibited, however, since their aons don't produce as powerful effects as the books describe or affect people at all, and they still have not completed their transformations to pre-Reod Elantrians. They speculate that the first working Aon Ehe drained a long-untapped energy reserve.
   
Line 1,267: Line 1,224:
   
 
=== Chapter 50 ===
 
=== Chapter 50 ===
;Characters
 
   
{{columns|
 
* [[Sarene]] (point of view)
 
* [[Ashe]]
 
* [[Roial]]
 
* [[Raoden]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Galladon]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Telrii]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Shuden]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Edan]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
 
Sarene gets a report from Ashe that King Telrii is delaying his conversion to Derethi for unknown reasons. Sarene also hears rumors about a law to force conversion of all Arelenes on the pain of incarceration.
 
Sarene gets a report from Ashe that King Telrii is delaying his conversion to Derethi for unknown reasons. Sarene also hears rumors about a law to force conversion of all Arelenes on the pain of incarceration.
   
Line 1,288: Line 1,232:
   
 
=== Chapter 51 ===
 
=== Chapter 51 ===
;Characters
 
   
{{columns|
 
* [[Hrathen]] (point of view)
 
* [[Dilaf]]
 
* [[Wyrn]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Telrii]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
 
Hrathen strolls through the Arelon Market, where many goods remained unsold, and many market stalls empty of customers, threatening financial ruin for the Eastern merchants that went to great cost to bring their products.
 
Hrathen strolls through the Arelon Market, where many goods remained unsold, and many market stalls empty of customers, threatening financial ruin for the Eastern merchants that went to great cost to bring their products.
   
Hrathen learns that Wyrn declined Telrii's request to be raised to gyorn, but would not act out in anger at the presumption. Telrii still is delaying conversion, and the nobles are laying low waiting to follow the example of the king.
+
Hrathen learned that Wyrn declined Telrii's request to be raised to gyorn, but would not act out in anger at the presumption. Telrii still is delaying conversion, and the nobles are laying low waiting to follow the example of the king.
   
 
Hrathen sees an arteth in one of the merchant stalls and investigates, and encounters Dilaf, who taunts Hrathen with his failures regarding Telrii, and says that his victory is sweet in the face of the gyorn's failure, but gives no further explanation and leaves.
 
Hrathen sees an arteth in one of the merchant stalls and investigates, and encounters Dilaf, who taunts Hrathen with his failures regarding Telrii, and says that his victory is sweet in the face of the gyorn's failure, but gives no further explanation and leaves.
Line 1,307: Line 1,242:
   
 
=== Chapter 52 ===
 
=== Chapter 52 ===
;Characters
 
   
{{columns|
 
* [[Raoden]] (point of view)
 
* [[Galladon]]
 
* [[Karata]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Roial]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Eondel]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Telrii]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Kiin]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
 
Galladon stitches the cut that Raoden got from fencing with Sarene, as they reside in rooms provided by Roial. Kaloo tries to reveal his Spirit identity to Sarene, but is unable to do so privately. Kaloo in his Dula role is able to join noble circles but wants to infiltrate his former cabal as well, where all the important decisions are really made.
 
Galladon stitches the cut that Raoden got from fencing with Sarene, as they reside in rooms provided by Roial. Kaloo tries to reveal his Spirit identity to Sarene, but is unable to do so privately. Kaloo in his Dula role is able to join noble circles but wants to infiltrate his former cabal as well, where all the important decisions are really made.
   
Line 1,329: Line 1,252:
   
 
=== Chapter 53 ===
 
=== Chapter 53 ===
;Characters
 
   
{{columns|
 
* [[Sarene]] (point of view)
 
* [[Raoden]]
 
* [[Kiin]]
 
* [[Roial]]
 
* [[Lukel]]
 
* [[Ahan]]
 
* [[Shuden]]
 
* [[Eondel]]
 
* [[Telrii]]
 
* [[Wyrn]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Galladon]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Iadon]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
 
Kaloo attends a meeting of Sarene's noble circle, at Kiin's house, to her chagrin. They discuss various options for dealing with Telrii, including foreign aid from Teod and rebels in Duladel. Kaloo suggests turning the nobles and people against the king rather than assassinating him.
 
Kaloo attends a meeting of Sarene's noble circle, at Kiin's house, to her chagrin. They discuss various options for dealing with Telrii, including foreign aid from Teod and rebels in Duladel. Kaloo suggests turning the nobles and people against the king rather than assassinating him.
   
Line 1,360: Line 1,266:
   
 
=== Chapter 54 ===
 
=== Chapter 54 ===
;Characters
 
 
{{columns|
 
* [[Hrathen]] (point of view)
 
* [[Telrii]]
 
* [[Eondel]]
 
* [[Raoden]] (mentioned only)
 
* [[Roial]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
 
Hrathen receives reports that Roial has been executed for treason without a trial, and rumors that Raoden has returned, though he believes that Sarene is using a look-alike to try to play for the throne.
 
Hrathen receives reports that Roial has been executed for treason without a trial, and rumors that Raoden has returned, though he believes that Sarene is using a look-alike to try to play for the throne.
   
Line 1,381: Line 1,276:
 
<!-- Part 3: Chapters 55 to 63 - The Spirit of Elantris -->
 
<!-- Part 3: Chapters 55 to 63 - The Spirit of Elantris -->
 
=== Chapter 55 ===
 
=== Chapter 55 ===
;Characters
 
 
{{columns|
 
*[[Raoden]] (point of view)
 
*[[Sarene]]
 
*[[Kiin]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Roial]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Telrii]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Daora]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Iadon]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Marta]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Galladon]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Hrathen]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Ashe]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Eondel]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
   
 
Watching the aftermath from the top of Kiin's house, Raoden confides to Sarene that since he's still alive, then according to the terms of their contract their marriage is void, after she's exclaimed over her own shortcomings for not putting together his disappearance in the first place.
 
Watching the aftermath from the top of Kiin's house, Raoden confides to Sarene that since he's still alive, then according to the terms of their contract their marriage is void, after she's exclaimed over her own shortcomings for not putting together his disappearance in the first place.
Line 1,404: Line 1,281:
 
Raoden assures her that he has no intention of avoiding their marriage, and suggests they make it formal. Left to his own thoughts for a moment his concerns show in sending Galladon back to New Elantris earlier, to teach the people AonDor. He admits there won't be much time, but it's better than nothing.
 
Raoden assures her that he has no intention of avoiding their marriage, and suggests they make it formal. Left to his own thoughts for a moment his concerns show in sending Galladon back to New Elantris earlier, to teach the people AonDor. He admits there won't be much time, but it's better than nothing.
   
Drawing [[Aon#Nae|Aon Nae]] they study the palace grounds together through the magnifying scope that particular Aon creates. Raoden is horrified to see the corpse of Eondel lying next to Telrii.
+
Drawing [[Aon#Nae|Aon Nae]] they study the palace grounds together through the magnifying scope that particular Aon creates. Raoden is horrified to see to see the corpse of Eondel lying next to Telrii.
   
 
*[[bws: annotation-elantris-chapter-55|Chapter 55 Annotation]]
 
*[[bws: annotation-elantris-chapter-55|Chapter 55 Annotation]]
   
 
=== Chapter 56 ===
 
=== Chapter 56 ===
;Characters
 
 
{{columns|
 
*[[Sarene]] (point of view)
 
*[[Raoden]] (point of view)
 
*[[Ashe]]
 
*[[Kiin]]
 
*[[Lukel]]
 
*[[Shuden]]
 
*[[Seinalan]]
 
*[[Dilaf]]
 
*[[Torena]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Telrii]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Eondel]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Roial]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Iadon]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Hrathen]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Galladon]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
   
 
Now on the roof with Raoden and Sarene, Ashe explains in the company of Kiin, Lukel, and Shuden of Eondel's foolish charge into the palace to avenge the death of Roial. Raoden is the first to call it foolish with Sarene agreeing, though only because she sees a leader's perspective, not a man's that would surely be mourning the loss of both Roial and Eondel.
 
Now on the roof with Raoden and Sarene, Ashe explains in the company of Kiin, Lukel, and Shuden of Eondel's foolish charge into the palace to avenge the death of Roial. Raoden is the first to call it foolish with Sarene agreeing, though only because she sees a leader's perspective, not a man's that would surely be mourning the loss of both Roial and Eondel.
Line 1,439: Line 1,295:
 
Addressing a large crowd of nobles not much later in the palace throne room, Raoden only manages to begin his speech before he's interrupted by a feeling of someone manipulating the Dor. Someone he suspected is a Derethi priest but stunned reactions from the crowd bring his attention to what had been altered.
 
Addressing a large crowd of nobles not much later in the palace throne room, Raoden only manages to begin his speech before he's interrupted by a feeling of someone manipulating the Dor. Someone he suspected is a Derethi priest but stunned reactions from the crowd bring his attention to what had been altered.
   
Though they see his Elantrian appearance the crowd is more dumbfounded than shocked. After so long of expecting the worst the nobility can't bring itself to feel appalled. Before he can think, Sarene comes to his defense, reminding the people that Raoden is still the man who cared about them before his exile, despite what he's become.
+
Though they see his Elantrian appearance the crowd is more dumbfounded than shocked. After so long of expecting the worst the noblility can't bring itself to feel appalled. Before he can think, Sarene comes to his defense, reminding the people that Raoden is still the man who cared about them before his exile, despite what he's become.
   
 
A few random cheers excite the rest of the audience into an upbeat support for Raoden's kingship. Dilaf, the Derethi priest that had used the Dor to remove Raoden's mask, stalks angrily out of the throne room in the wake of the reaction he'd not expected from his manipulating.
 
A few random cheers excite the rest of the audience into an upbeat support for Raoden's kingship. Dilaf, the Derethi priest that had used the Dor to remove Raoden's mask, stalks angrily out of the throne room in the wake of the reaction he'd not expected from his manipulating.
Line 1,448: Line 1,304:
   
 
=== Chapter 57 ===
 
=== Chapter 57 ===
;Characters
 
 
{{columns|
 
*[[Hrathen]] (point of view)
 
*[[Raoden]]
 
*[[Sarene]]
 
*[[Dilaf]]
 
*[[Telrii]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Jaddeth]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Wulfden the Fourth|Wyrn]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
   
 
Hrathen observes the entire series of events in the throne room, contemplating his feelings toward Sarene and why he hates this imposter that looks like Raoden.
 
Hrathen observes the entire series of events in the throne room, contemplating his feelings toward Sarene and why he hates this imposter that looks like Raoden.
Line 1,471: Line 1,314:
   
 
=== Chapter 58 ===
 
=== Chapter 58 ===
;Characters
 
   
{{columns|
 
*[[Raoden]] (point of view)
 
*[[Sarene]] (point of view)
 
*[[Hrathen]] (point of view)
 
*[[Dilaf]]
 
*[[Hoid]]
 
*[[Ashe]]
 
*[[Kiin]]
 
*[[Lukel]]
 
*[[Daora]]
 
*[[Shuden]]
 
*[[Torena]]
 
*[[Daorn]]
 
*[[Kaise]]
 
*[[Adien]]
 
*[[Jalla]]
 
*[[Roial]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Telrii]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Iadon]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Galladon]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Karata]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Eventeo]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Jaddeth]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Wulfden the Fourth|Wyrn]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
 
Raoden awakens to strange sounds in Roial's mansion. Immediately upon investigating the disturbance he meets with the Dakhor monks. One of them is Dilaf, who disables Raoden in his attempt to arm himself.
 
Raoden awakens to strange sounds in Roial's mansion. Immediately upon investigating the disturbance he meets with the Dakhor monks. One of them is Dilaf, who disables Raoden in his attempt to arm himself.
   
Line 1,512: Line 1,327:
   
 
=== Chapter 59 ===
 
=== Chapter 59 ===
;Characters
 
 
{{columns|
 
*[[Raoden]] (point of view)
 
*[[Sarene]] (point of view)
 
*[[Hrathen]] (point of view)
 
*[[Dilaf]]
 
*[[Kiin]]
 
*[[Hrathen's seon]]
 
*[[Eventeo]]
 
*[[Daora]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Lukel]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Wulfden the Fourth|Wyrn]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
   
 
Raoden awakens as a hostage but the blow to his head has left him dizzy and he is unable to heal as an Elantrian. Noticing Dilaf has besieged Kiin's house he tries to shout.
 
Raoden awakens as a hostage but the blow to his head has left him dizzy and he is unable to heal as an Elantrian. Noticing Dilaf has besieged Kiin's house he tries to shout.
Line 1,533: Line 1,332:
 
Sarene is distraught to see Raoden captive but accepts the inevitable fate she's convinced awaits him. She will not trade the lives of anyone in Kiin's household for what she surmises Dilaf will demand of in exchange for Raoden, even if she offered herself up.
 
Sarene is distraught to see Raoden captive but accepts the inevitable fate she's convinced awaits him. She will not trade the lives of anyone in Kiin's household for what she surmises Dilaf will demand of in exchange for Raoden, even if she offered herself up.
   
She realizes it's too late, because as she steps out onto the balcony the Dakhor monks ambush her and Kiin, taking them captive. Dilaf demands Hrathen's seon to communicate with Eventeo and inform him of the terms of surrender. Though Dilaf has no intention of admitting it, he just wants to murder the king and spread chaos throughout. Hrathen is conflicted and openly revolted with Dilaf's campaign.
+
Although too late to realize, because as she steps out onto the balcony the Dakhor monks ambush her and Kiin, taking them captive. Dilaf demands Hrathen's seon to communicate with Eventeo and inform him of the terms of surrender. Though Dilaf has no intention of admitting it. He just wants to murder the king and spread chaos throughout. Hrathen is conflicted, and openly revolted with Dilaf's campaign.
   
Almost as an afterthought, Dilaf impales Raoden on his sword and leaves him muttering a Hoed mantra, "Failed, my love". Dilaf orders that the Elantrians be rounded up and burned.
+
Almost as an after thought, Dilaf impales Raoden on his sword and leaves him muttering a Hoed mantra, "Failed, my love". Dilaf orders that the Elantrians be rounded up and burned.
   
 
*[[bws: annotation-elantris-59-1|Chapter 59 Annotation part 1]]
 
*[[bws: annotation-elantris-59-1|Chapter 59 Annotation part 1]]
Line 1,541: Line 1,340:
   
 
=== Chapter 60 ===
 
=== Chapter 60 ===
;Characters
 
   
{{columns|
 
*[[Galladon]] (point of view)
 
*[[Lukel]] (point of view)
 
*[[Hrathen]] (point of view)
 
*[[Raoden]] (point of view)
 
*[[Karata]]
 
*[[Kiin]]
 
*[[Daora]]
 
*[[Jalla]]
 
*[[Kaise]]
 
*[[Daorn]]
 
*[[Adien]]
 
*[[Dilaf]]
 
*[[Sarene]]
 
*[[Shuden]]
 
*[[Eventeo]]
 
*[[Mareshe]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Taan]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Kahar]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Seala]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Wulfden the Fourth|Wyrn]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Telrii]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Jaddeth]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
 
Watching Hrathen and his companions leave the mansion, Galladon quickly creeps up to Raoden's body, finding him Hoed. Karata urges him on but Galladon has a promise he made with Raoden to fulfill. After which he insinuates on giving himself the same release to which Karata silently accepts the same fate.
 
Watching Hrathen and his companions leave the mansion, Galladon quickly creeps up to Raoden's body, finding him Hoed. Karata urges him on but Galladon has a promise he made with Raoden to fulfill. After which he insinuates on giving himself the same release to which Karata silently accepts the same fate.
   
Line 1,577: Line 1,349:
 
Noticing Shuden presumably preparing to fight his way free, Lukel steels himself to provide back up.
 
Noticing Shuden presumably preparing to fight his way free, Lukel steels himself to provide back up.
   
While venturing up the mountain Galladon considers the hope Raoden instilled within him, the hope he still clings on to, while Raoden himself floats behind the void of his own consciousness, avoiding the pain of his physical form. Reaching the pool, Galladon and Karata lay Raoden down for a moment of rest before they wade into the pool.
+
While venturing up the mountain Galladon considers the hope Raoden instilled within him, the hope he still clings on to, while Raoden himself floats behind the void of his own consciousness. Averted by the pain of his physical form. Reaching the pool, Galladon and Karata lay Raoden down for a moment of rest before they wade into the pool.
   
 
Nearing the built pyres in Elantris, Adien saunters away from the crowd. A Derethi soldier orders him back into line before slashing his sword across Adien's chest when he doesn't obey. No blood, Adien continues walking to the shock of the soldier, and lays upon the pyre, his secret finally revealed.
 
Nearing the built pyres in Elantris, Adien saunters away from the crowd. A Derethi soldier orders him back into line before slashing his sword across Adien's chest when he doesn't obey. No blood, Adien continues walking to the shock of the soldier, and lays upon the pyre, his secret finally revealed.
Line 1,593: Line 1,365:
   
 
{{quote|One square, four circles. Aon Rao. The Spirit of Elantris.|On the form of Aon Rao}}
 
{{quote|One square, four circles. Aon Rao. The Spirit of Elantris.|On the form of Aon Rao}}
;Characters
 
   
{{columns|
 
*[[Hrathen]] (point of view)
 
*[[Raoden]] (point of view)
 
*[[Lukel]] (point of view)
 
*[[Sarene]] (point of view)
 
*[[Galladon]] (point of view)
 
*[[Dilaf]] (point of view)
 
*[[Eventeo]]
 
*[[Shuden]]
 
*[[Karata]]
 
*[[Eshen]]
 
*[[Jalla]]
 
*[[Omin]]
 
*[[Jaddeth]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Wulfden the Fourth|Wyrn]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Domi]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
 
To Eventeo's horror, Dilaf begins cutting Sarene's throat. Hrathen, finally deciding to act, hits Dilaf. Regaining balance, Dilaf jabs the knife at Hrathen's chest, the blade sliding off his armor. Armor that was supposedly for show. Hrathen is satisfied in telling Dilaf nothing he does is for show shortly before smashing his steel forearm into Dilaf's face. Warning Eventeo of Fjordell's coming invasion, Hrathen shoves Sarene down an alleyway and blocks it with his own body.
 
To Eventeo's horror, Dilaf begins cutting Sarene's throat. Hrathen, finally deciding to act, hits Dilaf. Regaining balance, Dilaf jabs the knife at Hrathen's chest, the blade sliding off his armor. Armor that was supposedly for show. Hrathen is satisfied in telling Dilaf nothing he does is for show shortly before smashing his steel forearm into Dilaf's face. Warning Eventeo of Fjordell's coming invasion, Hrathen shoves Sarene down an alleyway and blocks it with his own body.
   
Line 1,628: Line 1,380:
   
 
=== Chapter 62 ===
 
=== Chapter 62 ===
;Characters
 
   
{{columns|
 
*[[Sarene]] (point of view)
 
*[[Hrathen]] (point of view)
 
*[[Fjon]] (point of view)
 
*[[Raoden]] (point of view)
 
*[[Dilaf]] (point of view)
 
*[[Lukel]]
 
*[[Galladon]]
 
*[[Ashe]]
 
*[[Adien]]
 
*[[Eventeo]]
 
*[[Wulfden the Fourth|Wyrn]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Dereth]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Jaddeth]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Mai]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Domi]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
 
Hrathen makes plans to smuggle Sarene out of Teod on a merchant's ship under the impression that Dilaf will follow her and spare Teod, unlike Duladel; Hrathen exposes himself to the guilt of his own past atrocities before he is murdered by [[Fjon]]. Trying to revive Hrathen, Sarene is interrupted by a group of Dakhor monks and Dilaf, drawn by the commotion of the surrounding crowd.
 
Hrathen makes plans to smuggle Sarene out of Teod on a merchant's ship under the impression that Dilaf will follow her and spare Teod, unlike Duladel; Hrathen exposes himself to the guilt of his own past atrocities before he is murdered by [[Fjon]]. Trying to revive Hrathen, Sarene is interrupted by a group of Dakhor monks and Dilaf, drawn by the commotion of the surrounding crowd.
   
Line 1,657: Line 1,389:
 
With a small army of monks, Dilaf begins his offense believing Raoden will be unable to draw his Aons fast enough to combat all of the monks at once. Suddenly, a group of Elantrians led by Galladon teleport onto the docks and launch a barrage of power against the monks.
 
With a small army of monks, Dilaf begins his offense believing Raoden will be unable to draw his Aons fast enough to combat all of the monks at once. Suddenly, a group of Elantrians led by Galladon teleport onto the docks and launch a barrage of power against the monks.
   
Knowing he has few options remaining, Dilaf scrambles down an alleyway, away from the battle, to hunt down King Eventeo, the leverage he knows will draw Sarene to him. Sarene notices and urges Raoden to pursue. Dilaf ambushes, disarms, and wounds Raoden. Forgotten, Sarene surprises Dilaf, attacking him with a sword she found. However, she is unable to keep up with the monk's superior physical abilities, and she suffers a wound to the shoulder. As both lay defeated, Hrathen surprises all by appearing. He blocks Dilaf's attack with a Dakhor magic enhanced arm, then uses the same arm to choke Dilaf to death before Hrathen succumbs to his wounds.
+
Knowing he has few options remaining, Dilaf scrambles down an alleyway, away from the battle, to hunt down King Eventeo, the leverage he knows will draw Sarene to him. Sarene notices and urges Raoden to pursue. Dilaf ambushes, disarms, and wounds Raoden. Forgotten, Sarene surprises Dilaf, attacking him with a sword she found. However, she is Unable to keep up with the monk's superior physical abilities, and she suffers a wound to the shoulder. As both lay defeated, Hrathen surprises all by appearing. He blocks Dilaf's attack with a Dakhor magic enhanced arm, then uses the same arm to choke Dilaf to death before Hrathen succumbs to his wounds.
   
 
Galladon arrives to report that the Teo armada is holding out against the Fjordell.
 
Galladon arrives to report that the Teo armada is holding out against the Fjordell.
Line 1,666: Line 1,398:
   
 
=== Chapter 63 ===
 
=== Chapter 63 ===
;Characters
 
   
{{columns|
 
*[[Sarene]] (point of view)
 
*[[Raoden]] (point of view)
 
*[[Ien]]
 
*[[Omin]]
 
*[[Galladon]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Wulfden the Fourth|Wyrn]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Dilaf]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Karata]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Shuden]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Lukel]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Taan]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
 
Sarene is insistent on not letting Raoden out of her sight until they are married. At the ceremony, Raoden's mind wanders during Father Omin's extensive speech. He worries that the Wyrn may have found a way to access the Dor, and the Fjorn may have their own version of AonDor. He considers that there are various ways to access the Dor, as he considers Shuden's ChayShan used to defeat a Dahkor Monk single-handedly and with his eyes closed.
 
Sarene is insistent on not letting Raoden out of her sight until they are married. At the ceremony, Raoden's mind wanders during Father Omin's extensive speech. He worries that the Wyrn may have found a way to access the Dor, and the Fjorn may have their own version of AonDor. He considers that there are various ways to access the Dor, as he considers Shuden's ChayShan used to defeat a Dahkor Monk single-handedly and with his eyes closed.
   
Line 1,690: Line 1,406:
   
 
== Epilogue ==
 
== Epilogue ==
;Characters
 
 
{{columns|
 
*[[Sarene]] (point of view)
 
*[[Raoden]]
 
*[[Shuden]]
 
*[[Lukel]]
 
*[[Galladon]]
 
*[[Adien]]
 
*[[Torena]]
 
*[[Ahan]]
 
*[[Daora]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Kiin]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Eventeo]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Iadon]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Roial]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Eondel]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Karata]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Saolin]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Hrathen]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Wulfden the Fourth|Wyrn]] (mentioned only)
 
}}
 
 
;Plot Summary
 
 
A week has passed since the wedding between Sarene and Raoden. During this time, the throne of Arelon has been restored to its former place in Elantris and serfdom has been abolished throughout the nation.
 
A week has passed since the wedding between Sarene and Raoden. During this time, the throne of Arelon has been restored to its former place in Elantris and serfdom has been abolished throughout the nation.
   
Line 1,727: Line 1,419:
   
 
== Postscript ==
 
== Postscript ==
Hoid stands beside [[Devotion's Perpendicularity]] and unwraps bandages from his face. He is surprised that his face and hands appear the same and that he did not transform to an Elantrian. He is accompanied by [[Skaze|a dark hovering sphere]] who trades witty banter with him and who accuses Hoid of failure at his attempt to transform. Hoid says that he is not disappointed, and says he sees beauty that there are still secrets to investigate, and that he loves puzzles. Hoid steps into the Perpendicularity and vanishes.
+
Hoid stands beside [[Devotion's Perpendicularity]] and unwraps bandages from his face. He is surprised that his face and hands appear the same and that he did not transform to an Elantrian. He is accompanied by a dark hovering sphere who trades witty banter with him and who accuses Hoid of failure at his attempt to transform. Hoid says that he is not disappointed, and says he sees beauty that there are still secrets to investigate, and that he loves puzzles. Hoid steps into the Perpendicularity and vanishes.
   
 
== Notes ==
 
== Notes ==

Please note that all contributions to The Coppermind are considered to be released under the CC4 by-nc-nd (see Coppermind:Copyrights for details). If you do not want your writing to be edited mercilessly and redistributed at will, then do not submit it here.
You are also promising us that you wrote this yourself, or copied it from a public domain or similar free resource. Do not submit copyrighted work without permission!

To protect the wiki against automated edit spam, we kindly ask you to solve the following CAPTCHA:

Cancel Editing help (opens in new window)