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*[[Paul Tanasin]]
 
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Paul and Dr. Marcus discuss Paul's moving out of home, and how Paul doesn't dream and believes himself to be dangerous. Paul seeing the Doctor was part of his agreement with his mother for moving out. Paul sees a ghostly figure, Nikka, that claims to be his sister, but Paul claims to not have a sister and doesn't tell the Doctor. Paul heads home and talks with Nikka about his ideas for making a city organization video game The game mostly runs itself with input needed from the player to fix small problems that keep cropping up daily, hinting at his personal life problems.
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Paul and Dr Marcus discuss Paul's moving out of home, and how Paul doesn't dream and believes himself to be dangerous. Paul seeing the Doctor was part of his agreement with his mother for moving out. Paul sees a ghostly figure, Nikka, that claims to be his sister, but Paul claims to not have a sister and doesn't tell the Doctor. Paul heads home and talks with Nikka about his ideas for making a city organization video game The game mostly runs itself with input needed from the player to fix small problems that keep cropping up daily, hinting at his personal life problems.
   
 
Paul's mother calls him and mistakenly wishes him a happy birthday a week early. To move the conversation on, Paul asks about her new case as an attorney. It turns out her new case is about a serial killer. A meeting with Geoff Mitchell, a partner at the firm, leads to pressure to make a plea deal rather than defend Mr. Caligo, despite most evidence being circumstantial.
 
Paul's mother calls him and mistakenly wishes him a happy birthday a week early. To move the conversation on, Paul asks about her new case as an attorney. It turns out her new case is about a serial killer. A meeting with Geoff Mitchell, a partner at the firm, leads to pressure to make a plea deal rather than defend Mr. Caligo, despite most evidence being circumstantial.
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Following the meeting, Geoff head to his big office, before transitioning across to [[Kingdoms of Light|The Kingdoms of Light]] on Mirandus, an alternate world. Here Geoff is a [[Destined One]], who meets with King Gosovic to confirm the next verse of the [[Narrative]] has started as he has discovered the next [[Dark One (title)|Dark One]]. King Gosovic wants to wait till the Narrative starts before moving to fight the Dark One, but Geoff, going by the name [[Illarion]] here, believes different and sets out with the next Destined One Kraisis, and a loyal knight to strike first.
 
Following the meeting, Geoff head to his big office, before transitioning across to [[Kingdoms of Light|The Kingdoms of Light]] on Mirandus, an alternate world. Here Geoff is a [[Destined One]], who meets with King Gosovic to confirm the next verse of the [[Narrative]] has started as he has discovered the next [[Dark One (title)|Dark One]]. King Gosovic wants to wait till the Narrative starts before moving to fight the Dark One, but Geoff, going by the name [[Illarion]] here, believes different and sets out with the next Destined One Kraisis, and a loyal knight to strike first.
   
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On [[Earth]], Paul has moments of panic while out and quickly calls an emergency session with Dr. Marcus. Here Paul comes out with the whole truth, how he sees the world differently and how he sees Nikka. Nikka tries to urge Paul to run, but the knight from Mirandus bursts through the door, killing Dr. Marcus with a sweep of his sword. Paul runs before the knight catches up and declares himself as Sir Ysla before trying to kill Paul. Paul embraces a power within him, and a big explosion occurs, killing the knight and moving Paul and Nikka to Mirandus.
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On [[Earth]], Paul has moments of panic while out and quickly calls an emergency session with Dr Marcus. Here Paul comes out with the whole truth, how he sees the world differently and how he sees Nikka. Nikka tries to urge Paul to run, but the knight from Mirandus bursts through the door, killing Dr Marcus with a sweep of his sword. Paul runs before the knight catches up and declares himself as Sir Ysla before trying to kill Paul. Paul embraces a power within him, and a big explosion occurs, killing the knight and moving Paul and Nikka to Mirandus.
   
 
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