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*[[Drile]]
 
*[[Drile]]
 
*[[Daazk]]
 
*[[Daazk]]
*[[A'kar]]
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*[[A'Kar|A'kar]]
 
*[[Gevalden]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Gevalden]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Skathan]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Skathan]] (mentioned only)
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:'''Khriss'''
 
:'''Khriss'''
 
:''Day 39—Dayside''
 
:''Day 39—Dayside''
Duchess Khrissalla and company have arrived at the port of [[Dosha-Har'Ken]]. They leave Private [[Torth]] to watch the luggage, while Baon, Flennid and the Professors join Khrissalla in searching for supplies. They find that every time their linguist, Professor Cynder, tries speaking "Daysider language" to somebody, they scream and run away. Professor Acron notices a merchant with a sign in [[Dynastic]] and the group begins purchasing supplies. The merchant also offers his nephew [[Daazk]] as a guide for them to travel to [[Lossand]]. In the distance, they hear some Daysider language that they can understand and come upon the [[A'kar]] preaching in a public square. Professor Cynder attempts to talk to the speaker, who denounces them for using the holy language—as they retreat they realize the reason that nobody would talk to them was because they had learned the [[Karshad|language of the clergy]].
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Duchess Khrissalla and company have arrived at the port of [[Dosha-Har'Ken]]. They leave Private [[Torth]] to watch the luggage, while Baon, Flennid and the Professors join Khrissalla in searching for supplies. They find that every time their linguist, Professor Cynder, tries speaking "Daysider language" to somebody, they scream and run away. Professor Acron notices a merchant with a sign in [[Dynastic]] and the group begins purchasing supplies. The merchant also offers his nephew [[Daazk]] as a guide for them to travel to [[Lossand]]. In the distance, they hear some Daysider language that they can understand and come upon the [[A'Kar|A'kar]] preaching in a public square. Professor Cynder attempts to talk to the speaker, who denounces them for using the holy language—as they retreat they realize the reason that nobody would talk to them was because they had learned the [[Karshad|language of the clergy]].
   
 
{{anchor|Part One}}
 
{{anchor|Part One}}
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:''Flashback—Eight Years ago''
 
:''Flashback—Eight Years ago''
[[Khrissalla's_Journal#Sand_Masters|Recruit]] Traiben displays potential and Recruit Drile, son of [[Mastrell Rile]], is mentioned as showing the most potential seen in years. Lord Mastrell Praxton and Elorin discuss that it was a strong year of recruits—until it is Kenton's turn to be [[Khrissalla's_Journal#Sand_Mastery_Test|test]]ed for sand mastery. He displays only the smallest measure of potential in sand mastery, a fact which embarrasses his father. He joins despite protests from his father that he should pursue another profession; as Kenton argues that the law says he cannot be prohibited from entering the Diem as an Acolent.
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[[Khrissalla's_Journal#Sand_Masters|Recruit]] Traiben displays potential and Recruit Drile, son of Mastrell [[Reenst Rile|Rile]], is mentioned as showing the most potential seen in years. Lord Mastrell Praxton and Elorin discuss that it was a strong year of recruits—until it is Kenton's turn to be [[Khrissalla's_Journal#Sand_Mastery_Test|test]]ed for sand mastery. He displays only the smallest measure of potential in sand mastery, a fact which embarrasses his father. He joins despite protests from his father that he should pursue another profession; as Kenton argues that the law says he cannot be prohibited from entering the Diem as an Acolent.
   
 
:''Now—The Kerla''
 
:''Now—The Kerla''
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*[[Daazk]]
 
*[[Daazk]]
 
*[[Drile]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Drile]] (mentioned only)
*[[A'kar]] (mentioned only)
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*[[A'Kar|A'kar]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Autonomy]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Autonomy]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Kerzt]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Kerzt]] (mentioned only)
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*[[Lord Admiral]] [[Delius]]
 
*[[Lord Admiral]] [[Delius]]
 
*[[Lord Artisan]] [[Rite]]
 
*[[Lord Artisan]] [[Rite]]
*[[Lady Mason]]
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*[[Lord Mason|Lady Mason]]
 
*[[N'Teese]]
 
*[[N'Teese]]
 
*[[Baon]]
 
*[[Baon]]
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Kenton's party arrives at the Artisan's Central Studio and find Khrissalla there waiting to help as his new "diplomat." They enter to speak with the [[Lord Artisan]]. Kenton translates for Khrisalla to Lord Rite, but N'Teese translates the Lossandin into Dynastic for Khriss. Lord Rite is mostly upset about the unpaid debts and the possibility of future theft. Khrissalla, appalled by Kenton's lack of tact and compromise, provides a solution quickly: sand masters will help the Lord Artisan on a percentage basis to keep them incentivized; and, in return, the Lord Artisan will vote for the Diem. To show good faith, The Lord Mastrell must pay the debt, but Rite clarifies that he only owes 1,500,000 lak to the Draft. He also knows that the Farmers Congress is owed another 500,000 lak. As they depart, Kenton wonders to whom the other 5,000,000 lak is owed.
 
Kenton's party arrives at the Artisan's Central Studio and find Khrissalla there waiting to help as his new "diplomat." They enter to speak with the [[Lord Artisan]]. Kenton translates for Khrisalla to Lord Rite, but N'Teese translates the Lossandin into Dynastic for Khriss. Lord Rite is mostly upset about the unpaid debts and the possibility of future theft. Khrissalla, appalled by Kenton's lack of tact and compromise, provides a solution quickly: sand masters will help the Lord Artisan on a percentage basis to keep them incentivized; and, in return, the Lord Artisan will vote for the Diem. To show good faith, The Lord Mastrell must pay the debt, but Rite clarifies that he only owes 1,500,000 lak to the Draft. He also knows that the Farmers Congress is owed another 500,000 lak. As they depart, Kenton wonders to whom the other 5,000,000 lak is owed.
   
Khriss wants to join Kenton for his next appointment, but Kenton notes that by [[Khrissalla's_Journal#Dayside_Timekeeping|Taishin Standard time]] all of the Taishin will have closed their offices at twelfth hour. When he mentions that he intends to see Lord [[Raagent]], Khriss mentions that she was turned away from the Tower because the [[Lord General]] had left on a Deep Sand hunt. Aarik mentions that his father—the Lord General—uses hunting trips to avoid people. Kenton resolves to go find him, but he convinces Khriss that joining him on a trip to the Deep Sand is an order of magnitude more dangerous than their trip across the Kerla.
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Khriss wants to join Kenton for his next appointment, but Kenton notes that by [[Khrissalla's_Journal#Dayside_Timekeeping|Taishin Standard time]] all of the Taishin will have closed their offices at twelfth hour. When he mentions that he intends to see Lord [[Raagent]], Khriss mentions that she was turned away from the Tower because the {{Lord General]] had left on a Deep Sand hunt. Aarik mentions that his father—the Lord General—uses hunting trips to avoid people. Kenton resolves to go find him, but he convinces Khriss that joining him on a trip to the Deep Sand is an order of magnitude more dangerous than their trip across the Kerla.
   
 
:''The Diem''
 
:''The Diem''
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:''Kezare Slums''
 
:''Kezare Slums''
N'Teese arranges a meeting, so Khriss, appalled at the conditions, meets with the Lord Beggar in a filthy alley of the slums. Nilto takes a moment to send a young boy on an errand while Khiss is explaining how she would like him to support the Diem, because Gevin had come looking for support from the Diem for Darkside and the Diem must survive for her to fulfill his wishes. Nilto tells her "never to beg a beggar" because he does not believe a Mastrell can actually help the poor of Lossand instead of serving only thier own bloated egos. The boy returns with a small parcel, which Nilto gives to Duchess Khrissalla; it has Prince Gevalden's pistol and signet ring. Nilto refuses to explain how and why he has them, informing her that nobility in all forms makes him sick. Khrissalla calls him a "horrible man," which Nilto takes as a compliment. The Lord Beggar leaves and, while they return to the Lonzare, Baon questions the wisdom of allowing Cynder to lock the pistol and ring in his repaired trunk until they can be returned to Gevin's parents.
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N'Teese arranges a meeting, so Khriss, appalled at the conditions, meets with the Lord Beggar in a filthy alley of the slums. Nilto takes a moment to send a young boy on an errand while Khiss is explaining how she would like him to support the Diem, because Gevin had come looking for support from the Diem for Darkside and the Diem must survive for her to fulfill his wishes. Nilto tells her "never to beg a beggar" because he does not believe a Mastrell can actually help the poor of Lossand instead of serving only thier own bloated egos. The boy returns with a small parcel, which Nilto gives to Duchess Khrissalla; it has Prince Gevalden's pistol and signet ring. Nilto refuses to explain how and why he has them, informing her that nobility in all forms makes him sick. Khrissalla calls him a "horrible man," which Nilto takes as a compiment. The Lord Beggar leaves and, while they return to the Lonzare, Baon questions the wisdom of allowing Cynder to lock the pistol and ring in his repaired trunk until they can be returned to Gevin's parents.
   
 
:''Eleventh Hour—Lonzare''
 
:''Eleventh Hour—Lonzare''
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*[[Khrissalla]] (Point of View)
 
*[[Khrissalla]] (Point of View)
 
*[[Ais]] (Point of View)
 
*[[Ais]] (Point of View)
*[[Aarik]] (Point of View)
 
 
*[[Baon]]
 
*[[Baon]]
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*[[Aarik]]
 
*[[Mellis]]
 
*[[Mellis]]
 
*[[Cynder]]
 
*[[Cynder]]
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*[[Delius' son]]
 
*[[Delius' son]]
 
*[[Hoid]] (appearance only)
 
*[[Hoid]] (appearance only)
*[[A'kar]] (mentioned only)
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*[[A'Kar|A'kar]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Kenton's mother]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Kenton's mother]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Praxton]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Praxton]] (mentioned only)
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*[[Aarik]]
 
*[[Aarik]]
 
*[[Delius' son]] (appearance only)
 
*[[Delius' son]] (appearance only)
*[[A'kar]] (mentioned only)
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*[[A'Kar|A'kar]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Nilto]] (appearance only)
 
*[[Nilto]] (appearance only)
 
*[[Karmat]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Karmat]] (mentioned only)
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*[[Wilheln]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Wilheln]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Skathan]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Skathan]] (mentioned only)
*[[Lady Mason]] (mentioned only)
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*[[Lord Mason|Lady Mason]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Raagent]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Raagent]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Vey]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Vey]] (mentioned only)
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:'''Kenton'''
 
:'''Kenton'''
 
:''The Diem''
 
:''The Diem''
Kenton is meeting with Dirin, who was told that the [[Lady Mason]] is willing to vote for the Diem because of Kenton's actions in saving her workers on the construction site, as well as caring for their well-being. Khrissalla arrives and tells Kenton what happened with Gevin, Baon, and Acron. Baon and Cynder arrive, and Cynder asks if what happened with Jon is true. Baon explains the situation, including why he killed Captain Deral and the lieutenant: who were planning to sell their party to the Dynasty patrol. He was forced to act to protect both of their missions.
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Kenton is meeting with Dirin, who was told that the [[Lord Mason|Lady Mason]] is willing to vote for the Diem because of Kenton's actions in saving her workers on the construction site, as well as caring for their well-being. Khrissalla arrives and tells Kenton what happened with Gevin, Baon, and Acron. Baon and Cynder arrive, and Cynder asks if what happened with Jon is true. Baon explains the situation, including why he killed Captain Deral and the lieutenant: who were planning to sell their party to the Dynasty patrol. He was forced to act to protect both of their missions.
   
 
Aarik arrives bearing the news that the Lord General and the Lord Merchant are both missing. Ais confirms that because Kenton needs a unanimous vote that if there is even one abstained vote due to nonattendance, then his case to save the Diem will fail. Kenton asks Khriss if she would like to provide diplomatic support when he visits the Lord Farmer the next day.
 
Aarik arrives bearing the news that the Lord General and the Lord Merchant are both missing. Ais confirms that because Kenton needs a unanimous vote that if there is even one abstained vote due to nonattendance, then his case to save the Diem will fail. Kenton asks Khriss if she would like to provide diplomatic support when he visits the Lord Farmer the next day.
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*[[Autonomy]] (appearance only)
 
*[[Autonomy]] (appearance only)
 
*[[Cynder]] (appearance only)
 
*[[Cynder]] (appearance only)
*[[A'kar]] (mentioned only)
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*[[A'Kar|A'kar]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Heelis]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Heelis]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Hennin]] (mentioned only)
 
*[[Hennin]] (mentioned only)
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*[[Gennel]]
 
*[[Gennel]]
 
*[[Rite]]
 
*[[Rite]]
*[[Lady Mason]]
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*[[Lord Mason|Lady Mason]]
 
*[[Aarik]]
 
*[[Aarik]]
 
*[[Drile]]
 
*[[Drile]]
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*[[Gennel]]
 
*[[Gennel]]
 
*[[Rite]]
 
*[[Rite]]
*[[Lady Mason]]
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*[[Lord Mason|Lady Mason]]
 
*[[Lokkall]]
 
*[[Lokkall]]
 
*[[Delius]]
 
*[[Delius]]

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