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== Chapter 3 ==
 
== Chapter 3 ==
Kai arrives at the restaurant, getting a table to await his date. She soon arrives, but the two get off to a wrong start. Eventually they both get introduced, and Kai learns that his date is named [[Sophie (Perfect State)|Sophie]], a Liveborn from an Emerging Equality State. They soon find themselves delving into a deep discussion regarding the relationship between the Liveborn, the Machineborn, and the Wode. Just as Kai begins to feel some connection to his date, they are interrupted by a message from Melhi, threatening Kai.
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Kai arrives at the restaurant, getting a table to await his date. She soon arrives, but the two get off to a wrong start. Eventually they both get introduced, and Kai learns that his date is named [[Sophie]], a Liveborn from an Emerging Equality State. They soon find themselves delving into a deep discussion regarding the relationship between the Liveborn, the Machineborn, and the Wode. Just as Kai begins to feel some connection to his date, they are interrupted by a message from Melhi, threatening Kai.
   
 
Kai convinces Sophie to leave the table, and he leads her to a staircase that they begin climbing. Sophie inquires as to the relationship between Kai and Melhi, which he is reluctant to share, but eventually decides to do so.
 
Kai convinces Sophie to leave the table, and he leads her to a staircase that they begin climbing. Sophie inquires as to the relationship between Kai and Melhi, which he is reluctant to share, but eventually decides to do so.
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Kai begins the tale of how he met Melhi, thirty years ago. It was in a [[State#Border States|Border State]], which at the time Kai had very little experience with. He brought a full legion with him, fifty thousand men, because he didn't know what to expect. Kai soon finds out that two other Liveborn have access to the Border State as well. He also learns that the State has two very valuable resources; a spice that turns those who consume it into great warriors, and a metal that can cut through steel. Kai has thoughts about how it seems too convenient that he discovers such a Border State only after having conquered his own State.
 
Kai begins the tale of how he met Melhi, thirty years ago. It was in a [[State#Border States|Border State]], which at the time Kai had very little experience with. He brought a full legion with him, fifty thousand men, because he didn't know what to expect. Kai soon finds out that two other Liveborn have access to the Border State as well. He also learns that the State has two very valuable resources; a spice that turns those who consume it into great warriors, and a metal that can cut through steel. Kai has thoughts about how it seems too convenient that he discovers such a Border State only after having conquered his own State.
   
When they come across the natives, Kai learns that the other Liveborn and he are to compete for the loyalty and resources of the Border State, a concept that excites Kai because he's never competed against another Liveborn before. Kai agrees to meet with the other Liveborn, which would turn out to be Melhi, and is led into the native's village.
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When they come across the natives, Kai learns that the other Liveborn and he are to compete for the loyalty and resources of the Border State, a concept that excites Kai because he's never defeated another Liveborn before. Kai agrees to meet with the other Liveborn, which would turn out to be Melhi, and is led into the native's village.
   
 
== Chapter 5 ==
 
== Chapter 5 ==
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Like Sophie suspected, Lancing does not work the same way Kai is used to. Now it allows Kai to draw heat, specifically, rather than energy. In addition, Kai is unable to do anything with the heat he absorbs, it dissipating before he can. Kai takes a few moments to experiment. He realizes that the use of hacks, of things that don't belong in the State naturally, causes the storm to grow in intensity. This, combined with his ability to absorb heat, allows him to defeat the robot. By absorbing heat, Kai can make it rain harder, soaking the robot. He can then absorb large amounts of heat from the rain water to freeze it inside the robot, causing it to expand and tear the robot apart.
 
Like Sophie suspected, Lancing does not work the same way Kai is used to. Now it allows Kai to draw heat, specifically, rather than energy. In addition, Kai is unable to do anything with the heat he absorbs, it dissipating before he can. Kai takes a few moments to experiment. He realizes that the use of hacks, of things that don't belong in the State naturally, causes the storm to grow in intensity. This, combined with his ability to absorb heat, allows him to defeat the robot. By absorbing heat, Kai can make it rain harder, soaking the robot. He can then absorb large amounts of heat from the rain water to freeze it inside the robot, causing it to expand and tear the robot apart.
   
With the robot defeated, Kai looks to Sophie, only to see her pull her handgun to her head and commit suicide. Moving over to her body, Kai notices writing on the ground from Melhi, explaining that Sophie was the perfect robot, and that Melhi breaking Kai's heart was payment for whatever had caused Melhi to dislike Kai in the first place.
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With the robot defeated, Kai looks to Sophie, only to see her pull her handgun to her head and commit suicide. Moving over to her body, Kai notices writing on the ground from Melhi, explaining that Sophie was the perfect robot, and that Melhi breaking Kai's heart was payment for whatever had cause Melhi to dislike Kai in the first place.
   
 
== Chapter 8 ==
 
== Chapter 8 ==
 
Kai is back in Alornia, discussing the situation with Besk. He mourns the loss of Sophie, as he had viewed a deep connection with another Liveborn to be a new beginning in his life. He reaches out to the Wode, asking for information about the ten Liveborn nearest him, and the States they reside in. The Wode respond by apologizing for the situation in Maltese, explaining that Melhi will be punished for her actions, and that Kai is no longer required to procreate. Kai asks for the information again, this time the Wode giving it to him. The novella ends with Kai determined to end his isolation.
 
Kai is back in Alornia, discussing the situation with Besk. He mourns the loss of Sophie, as he had viewed a deep connection with another Liveborn to be a new beginning in his life. He reaches out to the Wode, asking for information about the ten Liveborn nearest him, and the States they reside in. The Wode respond by apologizing for the situation in Maltese, explaining that Melhi will be punished for her actions, and that Kai is no longer required to procreate. Kai asks for the information again, this time the Wode giving it to him. The novella ends with Kai determined to end his isolation.
   
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== Notes ==
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