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During the first stages of Kelsier's plan he was unsure about it , and often seemed ready to abort it, but as the plan progressed and the results started to show, his attitude improved.{{book ref|mb1|10}} He started to wear nicer clothing, no longer emphasizing his skaa worker roots, and deferred to Kelsier more.
 
During the first stages of Kelsier's plan he was unsure about it , and often seemed ready to abort it, but as the plan progressed and the results started to show, his attitude improved.{{book ref|mb1|10}} He started to wear nicer clothing, no longer emphasizing his skaa worker roots, and deferred to Kelsier more.
   
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Somewhere close to the fruition of the rebellion's plans, Yeden was given temporary command of the accumulated skaa army.{{book ref|mb1|20}} He already believed in Kelsier's vision, but actually being made general seemed to make him overconfident. After being given control, he led the army against the [[Holstep]] Garrison, well before the planned time.{{book ref|mb1|24}}. The army finished off the Holstep Garrison, then tried to march back to the caves. But [[Valtroux]] city was only a few days away, and its garrison was five thousand strong. They intercepted and massacred the army, including Yeden.
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Somewhere close to the fruition of the rebellion's plans, Yeden was given temporary command of the accumulated skaa army.{{book ref|mb1|20}} He already believed in Kelsier's vision, but actually being made general seemed to make him overconfident. After being given control, he lead the army against the [[Holstep]] Garrison, well before the planned time.{{book ref|mb1|24}}. The army finished off the Holstep Garrison, then tried to march back to the caves. But [[Valtroux]] city was only a few days away, and its garrison was five thousand strong. They intercepted and massacred the army, including Yeden.
   
 
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