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'''Kaladin'''
 
'''Kaladin'''
   
Kaladin is now a slave in a caravan, waiting to be sold and struggling to retain his ability to not think like a slave.
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Kaladin is now a slave in a caravan, waiting to be sold, and struggling to retain his ability to not think like a slave.
   
 
When approached by another slave about escaping, Kaladin gruffly tells him that he has no plans to escape because it will never work. A second slave approaches Kaladin and asks how he came to be a slave. When Kaladin doesn't respond, the other men tell their stories. It eventually comes out that Kaladin killed a man, but the one he did not kill is the reason he's a slave.
 
When approached by another slave about escaping, Kaladin gruffly tells him that he has no plans to escape because it will never work. A second slave approaches Kaladin and asks how he came to be a slave. When Kaladin doesn't respond, the other men tell their stories. It eventually comes out that Kaladin killed a man, but the one he did not kill is the reason he's a slave.
   
Kaladin idly toys with a leaf of [[blackbane]], contemplating using it to poison [[Tvlakv]], his slave trader. A [[windspren]] in the form of a slender young woman only a handspan tall speaks to Kaladin and wants to know what the blackbane is. Kaladin is surprised that she knows his name. As they converse, he observes that she is much more intelligent than a typical [[spren]]. When she asks why he doesn't fight anymore, he says that he has failed.
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Kaladin idly toys with a leaf of [[blackbane]], contemplating using it to poison [[Tvlakv]], his slave trader. A [[windspren]] in the form of a slender young woman, but only a handspan tall, speaks to Kaladin and wants to know what the blackbane is. Kaladin is surprised that she knows his name. As they converse, he observes that she is much more intelligent than a typical [[spren]]. When she asks why he doesn't fight anymore, he says that he has failed.
   
 
Kaladin sees Tvlakv going to inspect a sick slave. Kaladin tells him that the man has the grinding coughs and will survive if given extra water. Tvlakv removes the man from the rest of the slaves, and Kaladin thinks he is going to give him water. Instead, [[Bluth]] brutally murders the man. Kaladin is upset over his failure to save him.
 
Kaladin sees Tvlakv going to inspect a sick slave. Kaladin tells him that the man has the grinding coughs and will survive if given extra water. Tvlakv removes the man from the rest of the slaves, and Kaladin thinks he is going to give him water. Instead, [[Bluth]] brutally murders the man. Kaladin is upset over his failure to save him.
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'''Shallan Davar'''
 
'''Shallan Davar'''
   
[[Shallan Davar]] has just arrived in [[Kharbranth]], the City of Bells. She experiences a culture-shock, amazed at the number and variety of people in the city.
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[[Shallan Davar]] has just arrived in [[Kharbranth]], the City of Bells. She experiences a culture-shock of sorts, amazed at the number and variety of people in the city.
   
After a short conversation with Captain [[Tozbek]] of the [[Wind's Pleasure]], the boat she arrived on, she gets word that [[Jasnah Kholin]], the woman she has been chasing for several months, is still in the city.
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After a short conversation with Captain [[Tozbek]] of the [[Wind's Pleasure]], the boat she received passage on, she gets word that [[Jasnah Kholin]], the woman she has been chasing for several months, is still in the city.
   
 
Shallan and one of Captain Tozbek's sailors, [[Yalb]], make the trip up to the palace so Shallan can speak to Jasnah. When they arrive, she asks Yalb to wait for her outside the palace. It is revealed that Shallan had requested to be Jasnah's ward, and that Jasnah told her to meet her in [[Dumadari]]. Shallan has been chasing her from city to city ever since.
 
Shallan and one of Captain Tozbek's sailors, [[Yalb]], make the trip up to the palace so Shallan can speak to Jasnah. When they arrive, she asks Yalb to wait for her outside the palace. It is revealed that Shallan had requested to be Jasnah's ward, and that Jasnah told her to meet her in [[Dumadari]]. Shallan has been chasing her from city to city ever since.
   
Shallan is very nervous as her house's finances are in ruins since the death of her father, and if she doesn't find some source of income or other means of controlling their rival political houses, her house won't last long. She also reveals that her request to be Jasnah's ward is somehow related to resolving her house's crisis, though she does not make clear how.
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Shallan is very nervous, as her house's finances are in ruins since the death of her father, and that if she doesn't find some source of income or other means of controlling their rival political houses, her house won't last long. She also reveals that her request to be Jasnah's ward is somehow related to resolving her house's crisis, though she does not make clear how.
   
 
The chapter ends with Shallan turning a corner and seeing Jasnah.
 
The chapter ends with Shallan turning a corner and seeing Jasnah.
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'''Kaladin'''
 
'''Kaladin'''
   
Kaladin is sitting in the slave wagon, waiting for the caravan to stop for lunch and noting that it's well after the time the caravan usually stops. After a few minutes, he realizes that it is because Tvlakv is lost. Tvlakv remembers that Kaladin was once an Alethi soldier and might have knowledge of the lands. When he asks Kaladin to help them find the way out, Kaladin tears his map to pieces and tells Tvlakv that he doesn't know the way out.
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Kaladin is sitting in the slave wagon, waiting for the caravan to stop for lunch, noting that it's well after the time the caravan usually stops. After a few minutes, he realizes that it is because Tvlakv is lost. Tvlakv remembers that Kaladin was once an Alethi soldier, and might have knowledge of the lands. When he asks Kaladin to help them find the way out, Kaladin tears his map to pieces and tells Tvlakv that he doesn't know the way out.
   
In the conversation that follows, Tvlakv says that he is only comfortable with the idea of Kaladin escaping because he knows that he wants revenge on Brightlord [[Amaram]] more than he does on Tvlakv. Kaladin realizes that if Tvlakv knows about Amaram, then he also knows that Kaladin isn't actually a deserter, in contrast to the official story given when he was sold. Tvlakv acknowledges this but says that it's the story they will stick to because men who are guilty of high crimes are difficult to sell at a good price.
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In the conversation that follows, Tvlakv says that he is only comfortable with the idea of Kaladin escaping because he knows that he wants revenge on Brightlord [[Amaram]] more than he does on Tvlakv. Kaladin realizes that if Tvlakv knows about Amaram, then he also knows that Kaladin isn't actually a deserter, as the official story given when he was sold says. Tvlakv acknowledges this, but says that it's the story they will stick to because men who are guilty of high crimes are difficult to sell at a good price.
   
 
A short time later, the windspren comes back. She had apparently left during the recent highstorm, but now tells Kaladin that there is a large group of people not far away. A few minutes later, Kaladin realizes that it's an Alethi war camp, and that their destination is the [[Shattered Plains]].
 
A short time later, the windspren comes back. She had apparently left during the recent highstorm, but now tells Kaladin that there is a large group of people not far away. A few minutes later, Kaladin realizes that it's an Alethi war camp, and that their destination is the [[Shattered Plains]].

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